Monday, 12 March 2012

Blog Post #2
Persuasive Paragraph
I think that going to visit the Wonders of the World would be a much better vacation than going to an island.  Seeing the Wonders of the World opens people’s eyes about culture and history.  There would never be a dull moment when visiting the Wonders of the World because they are all around the world and visiting them would create interesting and exciting stories to tell others.  Visiting an island isolates you to a small land mass that only provides swimming, eating and shuffle board for entertainment.  I think that seeing the Wonders of the World would make a much better trip than going to an island.

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